The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart gives us information about the
number
of Use synonyms
households
in Use synonyms
millions
in Use synonyms
US
by their annual revenue in three Correct article usage
the US
yeas
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years
.
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Overall
overall
it can be seen that the Linking Words
number
of householders who had more than 100 000 incomeUse synonyms
were
increasing ,Correct subject-verb agreement
was
also
those who had income between 25 and 49 declined.
regards to two Linking Words
type
of income Fix the agreement mistake
types
who
the Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of Use synonyms
households
Use synonyms
have
changed , the Change the verb form
has
amout
of Correct your spelling
amount
households
Use synonyms
were
under 30 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Use synonyms
millions
for these people who had had more than 100,000 dollars. in 2007 Change to singular
million
this
Linking Words
number
was over 25 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
for these individuals who had 25 to 49 Change to singular
million
mllions
dollars. Correct your spelling
million
millions
Linking Words
however
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however,
these
total was slightly increased in 2011 for 25 ,49 revenue Correct determiner usage
this
in contrast
for people who had more than 100.000 $ dropped Linking Words
of
. on top of that the Replace the word
off
numbert
of householders who Correct your spelling
number
hade
100.000 $ Correct your spelling
had
have
reached Correct subject-verb agreement
has
dramaticaly
Correct your spelling
dramatically
to
over 30 Change preposition
apply
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millions
.
refers to the Change to singular
million
number
of Use synonyms
households
Use synonyms
who
Correct pronoun usage
whose
the
numbers Correct article usage
apply
were remain
unchanged Change the verb form
remained
such
as Linking Words
who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
hade
50,00 to 74 $ Correct your spelling
had
also
75 000 $ Linking Words
revanus
. even thoughCorrect your spelling
revenues
revenue
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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