The pie chart below compare the water usage in San Diego, Carniforlia, and the rest of the world
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illustrates
the percentage of Change the verb form
illustrate
the
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water
consumption in San Diego, California, and in all of the word
using three different fields, namely, residential, industry, and agriculture.
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world
Overall
, as is obviously shown in the pie charts, the agricultural segment witness
the largest amount of Change the form of the verb
witnessed
water
usage
in all categories, whereas
, people consumes
less Correct subject-verb agreement
consume
water
in the industrial field.
Regarding usage
of water
in the first figure, which is San Diego, humans’ needs of water
usage
in residential witness the largest rate, at 60%. However
, the industrial segment uses water
in this
country just around 23%. This
is followed by the last
category which is agricultural
field, at about 17%. Add an article
an agricultural
the agricultural
Nevertheless
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accounts
in
the whole world and Change preposition
of
this
proportion is considered as
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apply
most higher
one among all categories.
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highest
On the other hand
, the lowest percentage of the
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water
usage
is 8% and this
is stand
for residential in the globe. Change the verb form
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In addition
, California experiences approximately the same rate of the
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water
consumption in all categories. It uses 39% for residential, followed by 33% for industrial usage
, and 28% for agriculture.Submitted by f201600285 on
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