A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. Give detail of the course you took at the University. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear Amrit, How are you? I hope you've been well. I would like to tell you about my recent course which I
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University
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the University
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of Toronto. I studied
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Processing Technician
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, which gives knowledge relating to different food industries like
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industry, bakery etc.
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, it informs about regulations and guidelines which should be followed during
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of food. It would be great
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if you
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join the same
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as me because
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University
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of Toronto
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assist
in finding the placement and later in
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as well.
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, the professors teaching the
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are very helpful and they have tons of knowledge regarding the
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which they are keen to share with the students. One thing more, the
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provides a scholarship to the students who achieve
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GPA in all the courses. To secure your seat in the
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, you need to apply for the offer letter as soon as possible because
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program
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is in demand, so it is likely that seats will get occupied quickly. You can apply on the
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site, and to apply you will require your IELTS TRF, mark sheet of 12th grade and passport. If you still have any questions, I am more than happy to help you. I can't wait to see you! Your friend, Meagan
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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