The table below shows the waste production in 6 different countries over a twenty year period,

The table illustrates how much

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was produced in six countries over the

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of 20 years.

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, the United States was the biggest producer of

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throughout the

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the amount of

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that

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generated by Korea decreased significantly, the remaining countries'

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generation rose over time. In 1980, the figure for the production of

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in the United States was 131, demonstrating the highest number by far.

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figure increased gradually to just over 150 in 1990 and 192 in 2000, ending the

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as the dominant country. The value of

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generation in Japan was just below 30 and almost doubled by the year

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2000. The remaining countries demonstrated relatively insignificant figures for

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production except Korea which accounted for just over 30 in 1990 and

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value fell to nearly 20 after a decade. The figures for

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generation in Ireland, Poland and Portugal varied between 0.6 and 6.6 over the

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The table below shows the waste production in 6 different countries over a twenty year period,

a growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited while other argue humans must employ animals for research and foods. discuss both views

Some experts believe that It is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than Secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.