The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map displays the difference in Liverton docks between 1980 and now.
Overall
, it is shown that Liverton has been significantly redeveloped from a wet dock into a residential area.
In the north of the river, they removed two warehouses and replaced them with an education centre and kid's playing area, Linking Words
while
the crane was converted into a sailing club. The southern bank, Linking Words
on the other hand
, had one warehouse and another crane but today the old warehouse was replaced with a new hotel, apartments and car parking, accompanied by a river walk that stretches along the bank.
Regarding the river itself, it previously facilitated the ship's journey toward the coast but ships are no longer present today. Linking Words
Instead
, a ship museum has been established on the eastern side, adjacent to the northern bank. Linking Words
Additionally
, a bridge has been built to connect the banks on the western side of the map, accompanied by a strategically placed flood barrier.Linking Words
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