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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate how Castellon
city
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City
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 has transformed since 2000.
Overall
, the
city
 has modernized, with significant
improvement
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improvements
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 in new transport, shopping and entertainment facilities in the area. Starting with transportation facilities, the noticeable changes are the current public transportation
have
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has
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 been introduced within the
city
.
Firstly
, a new bike rental scheme has been added in the town centre
as well as
 a tramline has been built, connecting the
city
 centre with the university building in the northern part.
Furthermore
, the old train station has been relocated across the bike rental,
while
 the police station has been taken over the original site and a residence hall has been built
nearby
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near
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 the station. On the eastern side, a new airport has been under construction. Turning to other facilities, a new shop has been built by replacing the old market, which now has been moved
in to
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into
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 the east as a covered market. A new shopping centre has been built in the north-east location as well, where there used to be trees. Looking
into
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near the port area, the main road has been turned into a pedestrian street, and entertainment
such
 as
cinema
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cinemas
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and
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apply
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bars and clubs have been constructed along the street.
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