The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the united kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph compares the mean amount of CO2 emissions per person in four Europe countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, the UK had the highest share of emissions throughout all the periods, despite a slight reduction.
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while
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Sweden had a downward trend, Italy and Portugal saw a noticeable increase.
It is clear that
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the UK stood at a high amount of producing emissions, starting at 11 metric
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, following which that declined to 9 metric
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. Sweden accounted for 9 metric
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in 1967and after climbing to reach a peak at over 10 metric
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in 1997,
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witnessed a dramatic decrease to approximately half (at 5.5 metric
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) in 2007.
By contrast
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up trends, Italy was responsible for over 4 metric
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, which relatively doubled to reach just under 8 metric
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. Portugal
initially
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recorded 1.5 metric
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experienced a rise to the same amount as Sweden in 2007.
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