The maps below show the center of a small town called Lslip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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The diagrams illustrate the downtown of LSLIP town currently, and schemes in order to develop

this

small town.

Overall

, by far the most dramatic change will be the construction of the Dual carriageway

while

the school and a part of the housing won't shift. It can be seen that new facilities for the convenience of citizens would be constructed

such

as bus station, shopping

center

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, car park, new housing, and pavement for pedestrians as alternatives to shops and the main road along the countryside. What stands out is a new two-line road

that is

called a Dual carriageway would be built around the downtown.

It is clear that

more accommodation has been considered beside the park which is now bigger than in the future.

However

, some parts of there would remain steady without alterations which are the shops between the main road and housing, the school, and those homes near the academic center.

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Topic Vocabulary:

town center
landmark
residential area
commercial district
infrastructure
urban planning
development proposal
rejuvenation
green space
sustainability
traffic congestion
property values
pedestrian
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The maps below show the center of a small town called Lslip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People say that nowadays, modern teens are too much reliant on Information Technologies. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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