The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two
maps show the change in industrial and housing Use synonyms
Use synonyms
area
for employees
The Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Use synonyms
future
Correct word choice
apply
future
development sees changes to Use synonyms
factory
, Correct article usage
the factory
road
layout, housing, and public facilities.
Use synonyms
Factory
is the only building in Add an article
The factory
this
industrial Linking Words
area
right now. Use synonyms
Then
, it will be demolished and will be replaced by housing Linking Words
of
employees. There will be seven housing blocks which are Change preposition
for
spreat
in Correct your spelling
split
this
Linking Words
area
with Use synonyms
two
Use synonyms
type
of housing, small and big. The next main change is Change to a plural noun
types
Use synonyms
road
layout. At Correct article usage
the road
first,
there is only one roundabout, Linking Words
whereas
in the Linking Words
future
there will be one smaller roundabout in the south. Between those, there will be a medical Use synonyms
center
and shops as the public facility. If we go to the east from the big roundabout, we will find the Change the spelling
centre
two
small housings and playground Use synonyms
in
the left Change preposition
on
side
and we will see a big housing Use synonyms
in
the right Change preposition
on
side
. The Use synonyms
last
facility in Linking Words
east
Add an article
the east
area
will be the school Use synonyms
at the end
of Linking Words
this
Linking Words
road
.
Use synonyms
In
the north Change preposition
On
side
, we will go from the big roundabout. We will see a small housing Use synonyms
in
the left Change preposition
on
side
and Use synonyms
then
, go Linking Words
stright
Correct your spelling
straight
form
the big roundabout, there will be built a junction across the river as Correct your spelling
from
an
access to the next big housing block which is located on the farmland. The Remove the article
apply
last
changes Linking Words
in
the Add a missing verb
are in
west
Replace the word
western
area
. There will be Use synonyms
two
small housing blocks, one on the right Use synonyms
side
Use synonyms
from
the big roundabout and the Change preposition
of
last
Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
road
.
Use synonyms
Lastly
, there are Linking Words
two
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
area
Change to a plural noun
areas
will
Correct pronoun usage
that will
be still exist
in the Change the verb form
still exist
future
, farmland, river, and town Use synonyms
boandery
.Correct your spelling
boundary
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, last".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, area, future, road, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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