The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two
maps show the change in industrial and housing
area
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areas
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for employees The
future
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apply
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future
development sees changes to
factory
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the factory
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,
road
layout, housing, and public facilities.
Factory
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The factory
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is the only building in
this
industrial
area
right now.
Then
, it will be demolished and will be replaced by housing
of
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for
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employees. There will be seven housing blocks which are
spreat
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split
in
this
area
with
two
type
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types
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of housing, small and big. The next main change is
road
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the road
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layout. At
first,
there is only one roundabout,
whereas
in the
future
there will be one smaller roundabout in the south. Between those, there will be a medical
center
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centre
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and shops as the public facility. If we go to the east from the big roundabout, we will find the
two
small housings and playground
in
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on
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the left
side
and we will see a big housing
in
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on
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the right
side
. The
last
facility in
east
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the east
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area
will be the school
at the end
of
this
road
.
In
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On
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the north
side
, we will go from the big roundabout. We will see a small housing
in
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on
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the left
side
and
then
, go
stright
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straight
form
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from
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the big roundabout, there will be built a junction across the river as
an
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apply
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access to the next big housing block which is located on the farmland. The
last
changes
in
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are in
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the
west
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western
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area
. There will be
two
small housing blocks, one on the right
side
from
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of
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the big roundabout and the
last
at the end
of the
road
.
Lastly
, there are
two
area
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areas
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will
Correct pronoun usage
that will
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be still exist
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still exist
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in the
future
, farmland, river, and town
boandery
Correct your spelling
boundary
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, area, future, road, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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