The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two
maps show the change in industrial and housing area
for employees
The Fix the agreement mistake
areas
future
Correct word choice
apply
future
development sees changes to factory
, Correct article usage
the factory
road
layout, housing, and public facilities.
Factory
is the only building in Add an article
The factory
this
industrial area
right now. Then
, it will be demolished and will be replaced by housing of
employees. There will be seven housing blocks which are Change preposition
for
spreat
in Correct your spelling
split
this
area
with two
type
of housing, small and big. The next main change is Change to a plural noun
types
road
layout. At Correct article usage
the road
first,
there is only one roundabout, whereas
in the future
there will be one smaller roundabout in the south. Between those, there will be a medical center
and shops as the public facility. If we go to the east from the big roundabout, we will find the Change the spelling
centre
two
small housings and playground in
the left Change preposition
on
side
and we will see a big housing in
the right Change preposition
on
side
. The last
facility in east
Add an article
the east
area
will be the school at the end
of this
road
.
In
the north Change preposition
On
side
, we will go from the big roundabout. We will see a small housing in
the left Change preposition
on
side
and then
, go stright
Correct your spelling
straight
form
the big roundabout, there will be built a junction across the river as Correct your spelling
from
an
access to the next big housing block which is located on the farmland. The Remove the article
apply
last
changes in
the Add a missing verb
are in
west
Replace the word
western
area
. There will be two
small housing blocks, one on the right side
from
the big roundabout and the Change preposition
of
last
at the end
of the road
.
Lastly
, there are two
area
Change to a plural noun
areas
will
Correct pronoun usage
that will
be still exist
in the Change the verb form
still exist
future
, farmland, river, and town boandery
.Correct your spelling
boundary
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, area, future, road, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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