Nowadays more and more jobs and tasks are done by machines which involve hard physical work. Do the positive effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects?

In recent years，

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are being used in more and more scenarios, especially in areas that require a lot of physical work,

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manufacturing.

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the impact of

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trend, the positive impacts outweigh the negative ones. On the one hand, the

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machine use leads to an increase in productivity, which allows the economy

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rapidly. With the growing number of

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put into production, because of the higher production efficiency of

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, the goods’ quantity yielded by factories in the same amount of time is thereby substantially improved.

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, a greater amount of goods are circulated and sold in the market, creating more value and allowing the economy to grow significantly. Another benefit is that,

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the higher rate prevalence of

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’ occurrence in production scenarios ,people will not no longer have to deal with mountains of work and will become less stressed.

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, they are more likely to it is more likely for them to achieve a better work-life balance. Nowadays, with the market and people's needs continuously

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, people’s workload has enomoursly拼写 grown. If more tasks can be done by

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, the workload for human labour will be cut down reduced. The main consequence of

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,

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as

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, reading and so on. These spare-time activities will strongly enhance their happiness and contribute to a terrific

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improved work-life balance.

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, though there are lots of merits

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trend can bring,

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that it is negative

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of the serious unemployment it

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which can give rise to increased crime rates and turbulence in society. The more tasks done by

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, the

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jobs

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for

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workforce, resulting in decreased individual and

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income and difficulties

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making one’s living.

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，用May来弱化一下比较好 force some unemployed person

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others or commit other crimes to make money.

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negative effect has undoubtedly caused turmoil

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society. In a word, it is undeniable that the phenomenon of

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number of jobs being done by

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has some disadvantages, but the economic and personal quality of life benefits are greater and more dominant.