The bar chart below shows the number of people who visited different museums in London during different months in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The data given provides information
of
the Change preposition
on
tourists
Change to a genitive case
tourist's
tourists'
number
who visited four different museums in London from June to December in
2015.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
a
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the
number
of people
who came to the museum
fluctuated throughout an
observed Correct article usage
the
period
. It is stagnant in the first two months, then
spiked in the next month, and eventually slowly decreased until the end of period
.
During the Add an article
the period
first-two
month Correct your spelling
first two
period
, three different museums consist
of Wrong verb form
consisting
History
, National, and Science Correct article usage
the History
Museum
, experienced a slight decrease respectively at 400,000 visitors
, around 180,000 visitors
, and 400,000 visitors
. Meanwhile, British
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the British
Museum
was the only museum
with constant
Change the article
a constant
the constant
number
of people
at roughly 420,000 visitors
.
In the next month, History
and British Correct article usage
the History
Museum
were
skyrocketed respectively at 600,000 Unnecessary verb
apply
people
, and around 710,000 people
then
experiencing
a gradual Wrong verb form
experienced
increasing
until December 2015. Replace the word
increase
On the other hand
, National
and Science Correct article usage
the National
Museum
fluctuated and they recorded a number
of people
at approximately 190,000 tourists, and 300,000 tourist
respectively Change to a plural noun
tourists
at the end
of given
Add an article
a given
the given
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, museum, period, visitors with synonyms.
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