The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. summarize information

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.

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The maps detail a
school
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floor change in the past which is in 1985 and
present
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the present
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time.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that by increasing the number of classrooms, the number of pupils
double
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doubled
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over these two years. In 1985,
Entrance
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the Entrance
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and exit were upon the
car
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park
in
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at
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the most northern point of
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school
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the school
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. There
were
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was
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an office and a library on the west
side
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, in which
office
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the office
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was
lane
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a lane
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separating and
along with
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parking.
In addition
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, there were two
car
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parks
by
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of
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different
size
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sizes
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.
The
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On the
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southern
side
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of the
school
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, the playing
fields
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had been constructed,
whereas
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, slightly less than half of the
school
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was allocated playing
fields
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. There were two
classroom
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buildings, and
the
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apply
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one
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had 2 floors was located on the right
side
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,
another
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and another
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one
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was in the
center
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centre
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. after
reconstructed
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reconstructing
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the
school
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presently, the majority part of
playing
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the playing
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fields
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has
removed
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been removed
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in
a
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apply
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favor of fitness, pool, and classrooms.
One
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new
classroom
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between
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classroom
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the classroom
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block and playing
fields
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is increased. The
classroom
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block stays in the same position, just
one
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extra storey is added to it. The third
classroom
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is
Wrong verb form
was
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widened and changed
its
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apply
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positioned
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position
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from the
center
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centre
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to
west
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the west
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side
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. The library has been transformed
to
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into
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the
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a
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learning resources center and computer. The office,
where
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which
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was next to the library,
remain
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remains
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unchanged,
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however
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however,
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the streets and small parking
car
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in the
school
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have been removed, just the large
car
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park remains the same,
although
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there is a change in its shape, transformed from
rectangle
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a rectangle
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to partial circle and get a little smaller.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, car, side, fields, classroom, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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