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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the data about how much money was obtained by a specific country from several types of commodities between 2015 and 2016. The table explains the percentage of change in each of the export
products
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 in 2016 compared to 2015.
Overall
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, the textile commodities experienced the highest increase in 2016,
while
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 gems and jewellery
products
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 were the only ones which were declining.
To begin
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 with, petroleum
products
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 started their export value at 61
billion
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 in 2015,
then
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 it grew considerably in a tiny fraction of around 3 per
cent
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 to the level of 63
billion
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 in the following year.
In addition
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, engineered goods were the second highest exported commodity with a total value of 58
billion
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 in 2015 before they witnessed a significant increase to 61
billion
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 or approximately 8.5 per
cent
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 in 2016. Meanwhile,
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the textiles
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textiles
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textile
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 trade amount still became the lowest among the others.
However
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, they experienced the highest climb to 32
billion
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 in 2016 by 15 per
cent
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.
Moreover
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, a slight increase was experienced by agricultural
products
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 around 0.8 per
cent
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 to the value of 32
billion
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 in the following year.
On the contrary
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, gems and jewellery dropped moderately by 5.18 per
cent
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 to 41
billion
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 in 2016 after reaching their peak at 43
billion
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 in the prior year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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