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Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelade
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Adelaide
Hobart
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cities
last
4 weeks.
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, nearly same
percentage of people in Correct article usage
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Melbourne
and Hobart
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cafes
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coffee
last
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Hobart
bought more instant coffe thand
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coffee than
Sydney
, but Sydney
residents purchased less fresh coffe
in comparison with other countries in Australia. Correct your spelling
coffee
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every city experienced
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their
daily habits.
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coffee
was
just under 45% in Change the verb form
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Sydney
, which was the higest
amongst all the cities in the chart, and for Brisbane and Correct your spelling
highest
Adelade
the rate was almost Correct your spelling
Adelaide
same
, about 34%. Correct article usage
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rest
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Melbourne
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coffee
coffe
or tea about 49%
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coffee
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Hobart
and Brisbane witnessed more than any
cities, Correct your spelling
many
this
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