The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males involved in senior
development
in
IBM, Microsoft and Apple from 1980 to 2010. Change preposition
at
Overall
, all companies saw an increase in their male participation in senior development
ratios, however
, IBM experienced a
drastic growth and became the most Correct article usage
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male dominant
company in the specific area over time.
In 1980 and 1985, only minor fractions of the senior Add a hyphen
male-dominant
development
participation belonged to men in IBM and this
ratio grew gradually to nearly a third in 2000. This
proportion around doubled by 2010, ending the period at just over 60%.
Microsoft's male participation in senior development
started at about 6% in
the beginning of the period and Change the preposition
at
this
slowly climbed to roughly 15% in 1995 and 2000 before jumping to around 45% at the end
of the period. Apple's proportion for senior male participants varied between about %13 and a quarter over time.Submitted by historicalpen on
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