The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart delineates the number of
fiber
purchased for 4 various types, namely Fix the agreement mistake
fibers
polyester
, cotton, cellulosic, and wool from 1980 to 2015. It is conspicuous that in general
the total number of Add a comma
general,
fibers
bought by their customers increased in these observed periods. Change the spelling
fibres
In addition
, it is insteresting
that the data reported the Correct your spelling
interesting
polyester
soared dramatically; however
the wool remained unchanged.
Turning to the Add a comma
however,
polyester
and the cotton, in the first time frame, between 1980 and 1995, the number of cotton demanded were
higher than the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
polyester
by around 5 million tons. In contrast
, after 1995 the
Correct article usage
apply
polyester
dominated another category by skyrocketing and reaching a peak at just beneath 70 in 1995.
As regards the rest categories, there was a fractional growth in the cellulosic from by
approximately 0 to just below 10. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the wool remained the same by starting and ending at around 2.Submitted by akunyesikafikan1814 on
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