The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the destination of anthropology alumni from one university.
However
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, the table reveals how much these
graduates
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earn after 5 years of working.
Overall
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, most of the
graduates
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started full-time work after they finished their tertiary education,
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part-time work
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postgraduate study was the least chosen destination among students.
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, private companies’ employees got the smallest amount of money and the
graduates
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who worked in the government sector had the highest salaries. It is observed from the chart that
graduates
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found full-time work the most appealing job as the corresponding figure is 52%.
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, studying postgraduate courses alongside working part-time accounted for the smallest proportion of students, at 5%. It is worth noting that the figure for the full-time post-grad study was as equal to that of the category
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as ‘’Not known’’.(8%) The table illustrates that the largest number of workers, who earned more than 100000
dollars
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100,000
, worked in the government sector as 50% of them are paid that amount of money.
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, the proportion of employees who earned the lowest salaries is larger in private companies at 10% and
this
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figure is twice as much as the figures for the government sector and freelance consultants.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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