The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
hours
of sunshine for three different towns, and the line chart gives data about the average temperatures for these cities
based on months.
Overall
, it is clear that
the annual hours
of sunshine for
New Change preposition
in
York
were higher than the
remaining Change preposition
in the
cities
. Additionaly
, considering the changes in temperatures regardless of months Correct your spelling
Additionally
London
and New York
showed similar pattern
during the period.
In detail, Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
according to
the given table
the residents of New Add a comma
table,
York
benefitted from the sunhine
more than Correct your spelling
sunshine
pther
Correct your spelling
other
cities
, at 2.535 hours
in that year. New York
followed
by Sydney, whose total Add a missing verb
was followed
hours
of sunshine were 2,473. In contrast
, the figure
for London
was significantly lower at 1,180 hours
in that year, which almost
half Add a missing verb
is almost
amount
of time Correct article usage
the amount
of
Sydney.
Looking more closely at the line graph, New Change preposition
in
York
and London
had similar trend
during the period, both two Fix the agreement mistake
trends
figure
peaked in summer times. In January average temperature in New Fix the agreement mistake
figures
York
represented in
just below 5 Verb problem
was
degree
, and Change to a plural noun
degrees
London
’s temperature was almost two times of New York
. Change noun form
York's
Then
these two figures rose, and they showed the same degree in
the beginning of April, at nearly 12 Change the preposition
at
degree
. In the following eight Change to a plural noun
degrees
Add a comma
moths,
moths
they showed Correct your spelling
months
similar
Correct article usage
a similar
pettern
, but the Correct your spelling
pattern
patterns
figure
for New York
was slightly higher than the figure
for London
. Interestingly, the figure
for Sydney was the opposite of the other figures, furthermore
the differences between the temperatures for the summer and the winter Add a comma
furthermore,
was
less than the remaining Correct subject-verb agreement
were
cities
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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