The graph below Shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The line graph compares the amount of closed and newly opened shops in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, between 2011 and 2014, shop closures showed fluctuations while
shop openings fell notably from 2011 to 2012 before increasing again from 2012 to 2014. However
, there was a dramatic decline in closed stores in 2015 but then
sharply escalated in 2016. Meanwhile, store openings saw a decrease from 2014 to 2015, followed by plateau
from 2015 to 2017, before declining again in 2018.
The number of closed shops in 2011 started from about 6000 and Add an article
a plateau
then
reached its pinnacle in 2013 by just above 7000. Nevertheless
, it diminished to roughly 800 in 2015 from around 6500 in 2014. It started to grow substantially in 2016, making the amount rise again to just above 5000.
Opened shops began with a decrease in number in 2012 by 6000 from more or less 8500 in 2011. Nonetheless
, it continued to grow until it reached its highest sum in 2014 by nearly 6000. The number is now declining to 3000 in 2018 although
it remained relatively stable from 2015 to 2017 by just about 4000.Submitted by ieltswriting91 on
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