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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table reveals
comparison
Correct article usage
a comparison
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 between different kinds of 6 languages (
Mandarin
Chinese
,
Hindi
, Spanish, English, Arabic,
Portuguese
) with
number
Change the article
a number
the number
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 of native
speakers
.
Overall
,
Mandarin
Chinese
 has the highest population of native
speakers
,
while
Portuguese
 is the lowest one.
However
, there is an
additonal
Correct your spelling
additional
language
such
 as English that
being
Wrong verb form
is
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 the most users in the world. Despite
this
, the total
number
 of
speakers
 is
Mandarin
Chinese
.
Mandarin
Chinese
 is
being
Unnecessary verb
apply
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in
the
Correct article usage
apply
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first place to have the most native
speakers
for
Change preposition
apply
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900
million
.
Although
,
Remove the comma
apply
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Mandarin
Chinese
 as a second
language
 or more is not as high as the
number
 of native
speakers
, the total
number
 of
speaker
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speakers
show examples
for
Change preposition
of
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Mandarin
Chinese
 is the most
for
Change preposition
at
show examples
 1.090
million
.
On the other hand
,
Portuguese
has
Verb problem
does
show examples
 not
many
Add a missing verb
have many
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 native
speakers
 to
be speak
Change the verb form
speak
show examples
 of, only
consist
Correct subject-verb agreement
consists
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 of 203
million
 with
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
 total
number
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
 213
million
. Similar to
Portuguese
, the
constribution
Correct your spelling
contribution
 of Arabic contains
small
Correct article usage
a small
show examples
number
 difference for 3
million
 as a
number
 of native
speakers
.
In addition
, native
speakers
 who speak in
Hindi
language
 contribute in the 2nd place which is 370
million
.
Furthermore
, as an additional
language
 and individuals who originally speak in
Hindi
language
, it
helds
Correct your spelling
holds
 to 490
million
.
However
, close to
Hindi
, 420
million
 is the total
numbers
Fix the agreement mistake
number
show examples
 of
speakers
speak
Wrong verb form
spoken
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 in Spanish that could be seen in the table.
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