Some people think more public money should be spent on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society
argue
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argues
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that public
money
used
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is used
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for
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to
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invest in
roads
and
motorways
rather than
on
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in
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public
transport
system
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systems
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. In
this
essay, will explain why
i
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I
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disagree with those
people
and support
with
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them with
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several reasons.
Public
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The public
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money
of a country majority
come
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comes
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from public tax
,
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and, therefore
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therefore
should be utilized for public infrastructure.
However
,
i
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I
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disagree that it should consumed for
roads
and
motorways
only. First is because,
roads
and
motorways
are not sustainable, because
it
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they
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will
increased
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increase
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the volume of private vehicles and could
rised
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raise
the
number of
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apply
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carbon footprint.
Secondly
, only
middle class
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middle-class
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and
upper class
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upper-class
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economy who can afford private
car
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cars
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and use
roads
and
motorways
.
Hence
,
the
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apply
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public
money
is better
can
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and can
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be benefited
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benefit
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by
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apply
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all
citizen
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citizens
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. To illustrate, if the development of
country
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the country
a country
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is only focused on expanding and enlarging the
roads
, only
people
who
owned
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own
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car
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cars
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or
motorcyled
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motorcycles
who
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apply
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can take
advatange
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advantage
of
and
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it and
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not effectively
solved
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solve
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the traffic
conjestion
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congestion
problem. Regarding
the
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apply
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consuming public
money
for public
transport
systems is
better
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a better
the better
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decision. Compared with
roads
and
motorways
, public
transport
can bring several benefits for
people
.
Firstly
, public
money
can be used to subsidize the fee of public trains,
as a
result
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result,
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many
people
could
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can
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afford and
utilized
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utilise
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for
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them for
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commuting.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
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used public
money
for developing
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to develop
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more and better public
transport
.
Cosequently
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Consequently
, it helps society to get
a
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apply
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better access to
traveling
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travelling
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and
transport
including to the rural area.
For instance
, Indonesia since 2014
is
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has focused
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more focusing in investing
for
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in
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imporving
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improving
the quantity of public trains and rising the number of
trip
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trips
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to serve public demand. In conclusion, public
money
is better
to
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apply
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used for the development that can
be benefited
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benefit
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for
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apply
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all
class
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classes
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society
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of society
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.
Therefore
,
i
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I
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want to reaffirm that
i
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I
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disagree with the statement that public
money
spent
for
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on
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road
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roads
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and
motorways
and used for
public
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the public
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transport
system is
wiser
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a wiser
the wiser
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option.
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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Infrastructure
  • Transportation
  • Congestion
  • Economy
  • Carbon emissions
  • Pollution
  • Social inclusion
  • Urban development
  • Efficient
  • Investment
  • Reliance
  • Boosting
  • Affordable
  • Private vehicle users
  • Public transport system
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