Some people think more public money should be spent on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society

argue

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that public

money

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used

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is used

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for

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to

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invest in

roads

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and

motorways

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rather than

on

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in

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public

transport

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system

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systems

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. In

this

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essay, will explain why

i

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disagree with those

people

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and support

with

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them with

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several reasons.

Public

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The public

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money

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of a country majority

come

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comes

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from public tax

,

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and, therefore

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therefore

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should be utilized for public infrastructure.

However

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,

i

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I

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disagree that it should consumed for

roads

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and

motorways

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only. First is because,

roads

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and

motorways

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are not sustainable, because

it

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they

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will

increased

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increase

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the volume of private vehicles and could

rised

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raise

the

number of

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apply

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carbon footprint.

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, only

middle class

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and

upper class

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upper-class

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economy who can afford private

car

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cars

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and use

roads

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and

motorways

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.

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,

the

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apply

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public

money

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is better

can

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and can

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be benefited

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benefit

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by

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apply

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all

citizen

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citizens

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. To illustrate, if the development of

country

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the country

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is only focused on expanding and enlarging the

roads

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, only

people

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who

owned

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own

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car

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cars

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or

motorcyled

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motorcycles

who

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apply

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can take

advatange

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advantage

of

and

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it and

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not effectively

solved

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solve

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the traffic

conjestion

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congestion

problem. Regarding

the

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apply

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consuming public

money

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for public

transport

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systems is

better

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a better

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decision. Compared with

roads

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and

motorways

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, public

transport

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can bring several benefits for

people

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.

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, public

money

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can be used to subsidize the fee of public trains,

as a

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result

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result,

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many

people

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could

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can

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afford and

utilized

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utilise

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for

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them for

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commuting.

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,

government

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the government

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used public

money

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for developing

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to develop

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more and better public

transport

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.

Cosequently

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Consequently

, it helps society to get

a

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apply

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better access to

traveling

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travelling

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and

transport

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including to the rural area.

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, Indonesia since 2014

is

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has focused

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more focusing in investing

for

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in

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imporving

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improving

the quantity of public trains and rising the number of

trip

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trips

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to serve public demand. In conclusion, public

money

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is better

to

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apply

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used for the development that can

be benefited

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benefit

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for

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apply

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all

class

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classes

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society

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of society

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.

Therefore

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,

i

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I

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want to reaffirm that

i

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I

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disagree with the statement that public

money

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spent

for

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on

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road

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roads

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and

motorways

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and used for

public

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the public

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transport

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system is

wiser

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a wiser

the wiser

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option.