The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*- labelled coffee and bananas in 1994 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given table shows the figure of Fairtrade-labelled
of
coffee and Change preposition
apply
banana
that Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
has been
sold in the Wrong verb form
were
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
1999 and 2004. The Change preposition
apply
number
were measured in Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
millions
of Use synonyms
eurous
and presented Correct your spelling
euros
into
five different Change preposition
in
countries
, which were Switzerland, Use synonyms
UK
, Belgium, Sweden and Denmark.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the Linking Words
sales
of coffee Use synonyms
was
increased in all Unnecessary verb
apply
countries
during the giving period, Use synonyms
meanwhile
trend Add a comma
meanwhile,
sales
of bananas may vary.
In terms of the table of coffee Use synonyms
sales
, Use synonyms
UK
experienced the highest growth with Correct article usage
the UK
the
number from 1.5 Correct article usage
a
Use synonyms
millions
in 1999 and the Change to singular
million
figured
increased eight times in 2004. Switzerland was Change the form of the verb
figure
on
Change preposition
in
the
second place, Correct article usage
apply
rise
by Wrong verb form
rising
doubled
in 2004 Wrong verb form
doubling
at
6 Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
millions
. Change to singular
million
Morever
Belgium Correct your spelling
Moreover
also
went up by 0.7 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
, to 1.7 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
in 2004. Meanwhile Change to singular
million
Demark
and SwedenCorrect your spelling
Denmark
, was
grew by 0.2 Verb problem
apply
Use synonyms
millions
to 2 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
and 1 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
, respectively.
Regarding the table of bananas that sold in 1999 and 2004, the Change to a singular noun
million
higest
Correct your spelling
highest
increased
was happened in Replace the word
increase
UK
, with more than five times, from 1 to 5.5 Correct article usage
the UK
Use synonyms
millions
. Change to singular
million
Furthermore
, Belgium Linking Words
also
witnessed a significant rise from 0.6 to 4 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
. Meanwhile, Switzerland was Change to singular
million
on
Change preposition
in
the
third place and increased more Correct article usage
apply
that
Correct word choice
than
tripeled
from 15 to 47 between 1999 and 2004. The Correct your spelling
tripled
last
Linking Words
countries
, Sweden and Denmark, Use synonyms
the
only Add a missing verb
are the
countries
with decreased Use synonyms
sales
, at 1.8 to 1 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
and at 2 to 0.9 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
, Change to singular
million
severally
.Rephrase
respectively
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, countries, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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