The graph below gives information about international turist arrivals in different part of the world.
The graph shows how many international
turist
arrived in some different places of the World during 16 years, namely in 1990-2005.
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tourist
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Overall
, it can be seen that number
of Central and Eastern Europe Correct article usage
the number
turist
visits increased drastically through the 16 years. At the same time, Correct your spelling
tourist
arrivals
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arrival
growth
in South America was moderate with a less
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smaller
number
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of turists
turists
in comparison with all other graphs. Despite Correct your spelling
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growth
, the USA presented the biggest number
of turists
which arrived during Correct your spelling
tourists
that
16 years.
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those
number
of arrivals in Central and Eastern Europe skyrocketed roughly tripple
times from approximately 31 Correct your spelling
triple
million
people to 87 million
in 1990 to 2005 respectively. The growth
of the
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turist's
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tourists's
number
who came to South America, showed figures roughly
7 at the very beginning and 16 Change preposition
of roughly
million
people in 2005. The USA, despite of
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growth
only on
30% showed the biggest Change preposition
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number
of arrived turists
, namely close to 89 Correct your spelling
tourists
million
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