The four pie charts compare three age categories in Yemen and Italy between the year 2000 and the predications for the year 2050.

The four pie charts compare three age categories in Yemen and Italy between the year 2000 and the predications for the year 2050.
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It is obvious that there are more populations aged under 60
years
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old in Yemen over the period shown, in which the majority of them are between 15 and 59
years
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old after half a century. In 2000, half of the citizens in Yemen aged between 0-14
years
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old, which,
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, was only 14.3% in Italy. The European country recorded 61.6% of the population aged between 15 and 59
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old and 24.1% who aged aged above 60
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, the figures in Yemen were 46.3% and 3.6%, respectively. In 2050, the proportion of ageing population(60+
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old) in Italy will almost double, reaching 42.3%, whilst the figure for Italian ageing between 15 and 59 is set to reduce to 46.2%, but the young generation ageing under 14 merely will experience a slight decrease, to 11.5%.
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, 57.3% of Yemenese are predicted to age between 15 and 59,
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only 5.7% of them aged above 60, albeit a predictable growth of 2.1%.
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, the percentage of young people under the age of 14 in the Asian country is estimated to decline to 37%, indicating the trend of growing older.
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