The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the comparison planned of a museum in 1998 and a decade later.
Overall
, the whole size of the building and the location of its garden remained unchanged, while
there were several changes to allocate the rooms along with
an eating space area which had been added to provide the
convenience Correct article usage
apply
of
the visitors.
In 1998, when visitors entered the building, there was a temporary exhibition on their left, Change preposition
to
while
on their right, the bags and coats stored together with
toilets could be found. To discover fixed display rooms, people just went to the north-west and the northeast of the museum, divided by a cafe and a huge garden in the centre of the construction.
For a ten-year period, guests remained instructed to enter through the same door, despite this
time the stores
section Change noun form
store's
was
on their westside. Wrong verb form
being
In addition
, spaces for fixed exhibitions were still three, however
, they moved away into the whole easterly side of the museum. the location of the cafe remained unchanged, in spite of a slight reduction on its right to add a toilet. While
it was still situated at its navel, several amenities had been constructed inside the park, such
as a sitting area and fountains.Submitted by talithanakhwah19 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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