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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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The bar chart compares the percentage of the intake of fast
food
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 by American
people
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 over 10 years. At first glance,
it is clear that
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people
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 in the USA
were
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the
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 big fan of junk
food
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 as a minor proportion of them have never eaten
this
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 kind of
food
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.
However
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, the majority of
people
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 ate fast
foods
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 once a week during these years. In 2003, just over a third and a third of folks used fast
foods
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 every week and once or twice a month. In 2006, the percentage of individuals who ate convenience
foods
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 increased to a peak of a little under 35% and at the same time the intake of these
foods
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 once or twice a month decreased to a quarter. In 2013,
people
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 a little bit lived healthy as the percentage of fast
foods
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 fell by approximately 10%,
by contrast
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,
this
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 figure
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 to once or
twice a month
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twice-a-month
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 usage. During these years, A negligible proportion of citizens had convenience
foods
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 every day at under 5% and those who never consumed these
foods
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 were at around 5%. The figures for individuals who eat junk
food
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 a few times a year, and several times a week were almost between just under 15% and a fifth.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people, foods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast-food consumption
  • frequently
  • economic downturn
  • age demographics
  • lifestyles
  • health consciousness
  • advertising campaigns
  • affordable dining
  • healthier alternatives
  • consumer habits
  • proliferation
  • trend analysis
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