The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart compares the percentage of the intake of fast
food
by American
people
over 10 years. At first glance,
it is clear that
people
in the USA
were
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are
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the
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a
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big fan of junk
food
as a minor proportion of them have never eaten
this
kind of
food
.
However
, the majority of
people
ate fast
foods
once a week during these years. In 2003, just over a third and a third of folks used fast
foods
every week and once or twice a month. In 2006, the percentage of individuals who ate convenience
foods
increased to a peak of a little under 35% and at the same time the intake of these
foods
once or twice a month decreased to a quarter. In 2013,
people
a little bit lived healthy as the percentage of fast
foods
fell by approximately 10%,
by contrast
,
this
figure
add
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to once or
twice a month
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twice-a-month
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usage. During these years, A negligible proportion of citizens had convenience
foods
every day at under 5% and those who never consumed these
foods
were at around 5%. The figures for individuals who eat junk
food
a few times a year, and several times a week were almost between just under 15% and a fifth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast-food consumption
  • frequently
  • economic downturn
  • age demographics
  • lifestyles
  • health consciousness
  • advertising campaigns
  • affordable dining
  • healthier alternatives
  • consumer habits
  • proliferation
  • trend analysis
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