The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast-food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart compares the percentage of the intake of fast
food
by American people
over 10 years.
At first glance, it is clear that
people
in the USA were
Wrong verb form
are
the
big fan of junk Correct article usage
a
food
as a minor proportion of them have never eaten this
kind of food
. However
, the majority of people
ate fast foods
once a week during these years.
In 2003, just over a third and a third of folks used fast foods
every week and once or twice a month. In 2006, the percentage of individuals who ate convenience foods
increased to a peak of a little under 35% and at the same time the intake of these foods
once or twice a month decreased to a quarter. In 2013, people
a little bit lived healthy as the percentage of fast foods
fell by approximately 10%, by contrast
, this
figure add
to once or Correct subject-verb agreement
adds
twice a month
usage.
During these years, A negligible proportion of citizens had convenience Add a hyphen
twice-a-month
foods
every day at under 5% and those who never consumed these foods
were at around 5%. The figures for individuals who eat junk food
a few times a year, and several times a week were almost between just under 15% and a fifth.Submitted by kmibehnaz98 on
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