The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.
The pie chart provided
,
gives information about the Remove the comma
apply
sales
of drink
brand called Correct article usage
a drink
Coca-Cola
categorized in 5 different areas. The accumulative total of Coca-Cola
sales
are
17,1 billion Change the verb form
is
drink
. Fix the agreement mistake
drinks
By
first sight, we can conclude that Change preposition
At
Coca-Cola
drink
selling progress seems toChange the verb form
drinks
a
huge success in all Add a missing verb
be a
area
. North America is the largest Fix the agreement mistake
areas
sales
contributor by 30,4%, following that 25,7% sales
came from Latin America. Change preposition
of sales
On the contrary
, Africa and Middle East sales
are only around 7%.
The line chart delineates the share price
of Coca-Cola
. In 1996, the drink
only cost approximately $32 but the price
surge
up to 50% from the original Wrong verb form
surged
price
into
a Change preposition
to
price
close to $70 in 1997 and even spike
more to Wrong verb form
spiked
near
$80 in 1998 Change the word
nearly
due to
the rise of demand. After that, the price
of Coca-Cola
seem
to gradually move in Change the verb form
seems
downtrend
. The latest share Add an article
a downtrend
the downtrend
price
of Coca-Cola
in 2001 is
$55.
We can conclude that there are many Wrong verb form
was
enjoyer
of Change to a plural noun
enjoyers
this
drink
brand, the sales
of the product distributed well across 5 area
. Change to a plural noun
areas
Also
, we can conclude that higher demand led to higher price
but the Fix the agreement mistake
prices
Coca-Cola
price
close in 2001 is still below average
Add an article
the average
of
the Change preposition
for
last
4 year
.Fix the agreement mistake
years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, drink, coca-cola, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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