The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area in Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area in Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table chart illustrates the main sources of money income of the police department in one certain area in England,
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the pie charts compare the proportion of money expenditures in the same department in 2017 and 2018 separately.
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, it can be seen that police funding slightly increased in 2018 compared with 2017. Mostly it happened because of the National Government and Local Taxes income increase. It is clear, that the proportion of Technology spending grew as well. The police budget grew from the figures from 304,7 pounds to 318,6 pounds in 2017 and 2018 respectively. The Local taxes showed the biggest improvement among all budget sources and exceeded the previous metric of 11.1 pounds
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Grants demonstrated the smallest rise, namely only 0,5 . Almost all additional profit was used for supporting Technologies with a proportional growth of 7%,
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the percentage of salary was slightly reduced from the number 75% in 2017 to 69% in 2018. Buildings and transport expenditure stayed at the same proportion of 17%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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