The graph below show the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012
The line graph depicts the proportion of
turtles
in India which have 3 different species from 1980 to 2012. Overall
, the olive ridley turtles
experienced upward
trend Correct article usage
an upward
while
green turtles
and leatherback turtles
underwent downward
trend. Correct article usage
a downward
Furthermore
, all species of turtle remained constant. The highest population is olive ridley turtles
and leatherback turtles
got
the opposite.
Looking in more detail, the population of 3 different types of Verb problem
are
turtles
started at the same level, index at 100 turtles
. Before the olive ridley turtles
fluctuated from 1997 to 2012 , there was a significant increase over 17 years from 100 until
around 135 Change preposition
to
habitant
of Correct your spelling
inhabitants
turtles
. Then
, all species of turtle
Fix the agreement mistake
turtles
goes
up and down repeatedly throughout Correct subject-verb agreement
go
all
the years.
Meanwhile, the Correct determiner usage
apply
green
Correct quantifier usage
number of green
turtles
had fallen gradually between 100 to about 85 animals over thirty two
years. The Add a hyphen
thirty-two
last
types
is leatherback Fix the agreement mistake
type
turtles
. It decreased rapidly from 100 to approximately 55 varieties of turtle since 1980.Submitted by Dedeways244 on
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