The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed, employed or further education in 1980, 1990, and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie charts illustrate
employment
status of Australian Correct article usage
the employment
students
after graduating in/their graduation from (sai cấu trúc câu) an Australian school in 3 different periods of time over 20 years.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the number of students
who successfully held the
job, the opposite could be seen in the rate of those who pursued higher education. Strikingly, unemployed graduates (n) were always the lowest.
Accounting for 50%, learners engaged in advanced learning were the highest. Correct article usage
a
This
proportion decreased significantly and then
continued to fall slightly to one-third of the total, at 37%.
In contrast
, people holding the job experienced a gradual increase by
15% over 20 years. Strikingly, Change preposition
of
this
number made up half of students
in 1990. Students
who work full-time contributed to
the most Change preposition
apply
at the end
of the observed period, at
2000.
In 1980, unemployed Change preposition
in
students
took up the modest share, at 10%, which was one-fifth of the highest. Although
this
rate rose moderately over 10 years, it decreased to 8% at the end
of the observed period.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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