The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organizations from 2008 to 2011.
The chart provides information about the
amount
of Use synonyms
money
(Use synonyms
dollars
) allocated to developing nations from five organizations between 2008 and 2011.
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Overall
, organizations 3 and 5 giving Linking Words
money
to developing countries experienced a downward trend, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
organization
2 displayed significant growth in allocated Use synonyms
money
every year. In terms of Use synonyms
Company
1 and 3, both had noticeable fluctuations over the years.
Fix the agreement mistake
Companies
To begin
with, company number 1 provided financial support of more than 0.5 Linking Words
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
to developing countries in 2008. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
money
surged slightly to almost 1 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
the next year. In 2010 and 2011 the sum of Use synonyms
money
was the same, exactly the middle of 0.5 and 1 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
. Shifting to company 2, in 2008 the Use synonyms
organization
gave merely around 1,25 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
money
grew considerably to above 2.5 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
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at the end
of the period. With regard to Linking Words
Use synonyms
organization
3, at the beginning of the period Capitalize word
Organization
exact
1.5 million Change the word
exactly
dollars
was provided, which remained the same in 2011.Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
organization
4 and 6 allocated their largest Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
money
in 2008 which decreased a little bit to around 0.3 and 0.4 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
dollars
respectively.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, money, dollars, organization, billion with synonyms.
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