Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people. Therefore, government should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the variety of knowledge, some
people
argue that not all of them are important and there is an infamous perspective that arts is not important. I do not agree with
this
statement,
although
arts
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may not be the best career that
give
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a fortune, it can emphasize not only the quality of
human
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,
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but
also
human well-being. One justification given is
art
plays a fundamental role as
people
are able to express their thoughts, emotions, and feelings in their work. It
also
can help in promoting their creativity and imagination in order to grow into dynamic, and in some
cases
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it becomes a therapy for mental health
survivor
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.
For example
, there is a medical method for bipolar disorder patients, which they should create a painting whenever they feel
big
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pressure of emotions.
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, practicing
art
has
direct
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effect
for
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self-development and self-healing. Personally, I
also
believe that the government should
establishes
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more artistic projects either for entertainment or health
purpose
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. A
further
reason to maintain the existence of
art
activities is
it
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they
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could develop
creativity
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thinking and widen
the
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linguistic capabilities. For some
people
,
art
is a
media
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to communicate and to
conver
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converge
meaning through pictures, melodies, and symbols. Heal The World by Michael Jackson,
for instance
, has
a meaningful messages
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a meaningful message
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for
people
around the world to start
give
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attention
for
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humanity, especially war, at that time.
Consequently
, the song
not
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only entertaining but
also
educating
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people
. In conclusion,
art
certainly helps us develop our health both mentally and physically. It should be supported by the governments as it plays an important role
to deliver
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in delivering
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messages, which beneficial for nations. I
am firmly disagree
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with the statement of removing
art
from the regulations.
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