The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the production of
sugar
from sugar
cane by some factories and special machines. Overall
, it can be seen that the process contains 7 steps which start with growing sugar
cane and finish by drying and cooling with larger storage.
Initially
, after growing sugar
cane over 12-18 months, it is harvested by a special machine or with help by hand. Following that, sugar
canes were crushed, and after production juice was ready for purification. In the fourth stage, Joice was purified by a limestone filter, following which juice evaporated by heat, was located under the special storage, and became syrup. In the penultimate step, syrup and sugar
crystals are separated by centrifuge and are ready for drying and cooling. Eventually, with drying and cooling by huge storage, sugar
is produced and ready for selling by stores.
To put it in a nutshell, it is crystal clear that there are 7 stages, and by collaboration
of a variety of machines, motors, and humans Add an article
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sugar
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