The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The chart provides information about the
number
of Use synonyms
minutes
consumed by people taking in three types of phones in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of calling Use synonyms
minutes
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number
used through the local fixed line is the same after reaching the peak, Use synonyms
while
the time spent on both national and international fixed-line and mobiles increased dramatically in seven years.
Looking in more detail, the graph illustrates that there was a significant rise in the local fixed line Linking Words
minutes
Use synonyms
number
from 1995 to 1999 reaching the peak of 90 billion Use synonyms
minutes
before falling by the same Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
minutes
in the Use synonyms
last
year
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However
, the Linking Words
number
of both national and international fixed lines and mobile lines went up. Use synonyms
For instance
, local and global fixed phones have constantly rocketed by approximately 2.5 billion Linking Words
minutes
every year before remaining constant in the Use synonyms
last
year. Moving to mobile I had a remarkable 18-fold jump.Linking Words
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