You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard
of
my current housing situation. Since the start of the Change preposition
to
semester
I have been sharing a dorm unit with another junior student. Our rather contrasting schedules and lifestyles have made it quite difficult for us to Add a comma
semester,
coexisit
. Please allow me to elaborate Correct your spelling
coexist
with
a few daily scenarios. Our weekly routine consists of Change preposition
on
assiting
Correct your spelling
assisting
in person
classes in the main hall Add a hyphen
in-person
as well as
various study sessions at the library and of course, at the dorms. In my case, I attend classes in the morning and come back to the dorm later in the afternoon to go over my notes of the day and complete the Linking Words
assigments
for my next class. Correct your spelling
assignments
assignment
However
, my roommate does not only the exact opposite but Linking Words
also
happens to be involved in a lot of group activities that demand frequent meetings which she holds in our dorm at least once a week.Linking Words
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greeting and closing
Ensure you use proper greeting and closing in your letters to maintain the format expected in the test. For example, closing with 'Yours faithfully' or 'Yours sincerely' followed by your name would improve the structure.
complete response
Focus on expanding your response to cover all the bullet points outlined in the task. Providing a full explanation for each and offering a clear preference for the type of accommodation you require are essential to achieving a higher score.
logical structure
While you have maintained a logical structure to your writing, aim to break your ideas into clear paragraphs, dedicating a new paragraph to each new main idea to improve readability and coherence.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your writing is generally suitable and polite, in line with the requirements of the task. However, for a higher score, make sure to fully develop each point and convey your message more effectively.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,