In the future, nobody wil buy printed newspapers of books because they will be able to read everything they want on!ine without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or
book
because they will be using Fix the agreement mistake
books
smartphone
to get everything they want online without paying. I am Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
complete
agree with Change the word
completely
this
statement. In addition
, they will be able to get instant information for
their smartphone.
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from
Nowdays
, the world of technology is getting more advanced. Correct the word
Nowadays
Moreover
, usage
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the usage
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of smartphone
smartphone
will be able to influence environmental impact. Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
For example
, using e-books and online newspaper
are more eco-friendly rather than Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
their use
printed counterparts. By using digital media, we can Wrong verb form
using
also
reduce tree cutting
. As we all realised that making papers is made from tree trunks. Definitely, Add a hyphen
tree-cutting
thats
things can make the environment cool because the trees are not cut down.
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those
On the other hand
, most people did not have enogh
Correct your spelling
enough
time
to read newspapers of
books because Correct your spelling
or
their
should be working. They Replace the word
there
belief
that online Replace the word
believe
newspaper
or online content can Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
offering
free Wrong verb form
offer
acces
through some digital media. For Correct your spelling
access
instace
, they will be able to read everything Correct your spelling
instance
in
everywhere Change preposition
apply
such
as in a car and on the bus. It will not require much time
if we using
advanced tools.
The conclusion is, Wrong verb form
use
using
online Correct word choice
that using
newspaper
or online content can lighten the work. Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
Moreover
, these days most people don't have enough time
to just buy a newspaper
on the side of the road. For some people reading newspaper
is an activity that requires free Correct article usage
the newspaper
time
. Therefore
, using the internet or read
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reading
online
Add an article
an online
newspaper
will Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
be shorten
the Change the verb form
shorten
time
and their
Change the word
the
able
to do Replace the word
ability
activites
simultaneously.Correct your spelling
activities
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task achievement
You should avoid absolute statements, such as 'nobody will buy printed newspapers or books,' without acknowledging exceptions or exploring nuances in your argument. It weakens your task response by presenting a one-sided view.
task achievement
Ensure that you present a balanced argument when discussing topics that allow for different viewpoints, this shows an ability to engage with the task critically.
coherence cohesion
The coherence of your essay could be improved by better organizing your ideas into clear, logical paragraphs. Each paragraph should center around one main idea or argument.
coherence cohesion
The use of cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) is important for fluency and coherence, but make sure they are not overused or misused.
coherence cohesion
The essay displays issues with grammar and word choice that impact the clarity of your ideas (e.g., 'they should be working' instead of 'they have to work'). Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and that the vocabulary used is suitable for the context.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.