The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates two locations that are considered for a shopping complex in Brandfield.

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, both locations are located near the

City

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Center, but

while

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location

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1 is based in the northern side of the

city

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, the second

location

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is in the

south-east

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southeast

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side. Both

place

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places

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are

also

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surrounded by ..? The first

location

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is surrounded by roads, railways, and a river. To the north-west side of it, there's a housing estate for people that

lives

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live

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in the

city

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, and the

City

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Center is

placed

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located

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in the south. Not far to the west, there is a golf course and park for leisure activities. Different from the first

location

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, the second place

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that

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which

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is considered to be

shopping

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a shopping

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mall is positioned near the industrial estate. There are

also

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roads and railways as a means of transportation to go to the area. Another striking difference is the golf course and park is located far from the area.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, location with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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shopping mall
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accessibility
public transportation
congestion
local businesses
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urban planning
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consumer behavior
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