The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. 

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
Japanese
overseas travellers from 1985 to 1995,
whereas
, the line graph illustrates the proportion of
Japanese
tourists
who come to Australia in these times. Looking from an
overall
perspective, the number of
tourists
from Japan increased sharply per year,
although
, the percentage of Japan's tourist market rose slightly. The number of
tourists
from Japan, that were travelling abroad, was increasing linearly over the period from almost 5
million
people in 1985 to nearly 11
million
people in 1990.
Then
, the dynamics rose gradually for the next three years reaching 12
million
visitors. For the
last
2 years, from 1994 to 1995, there was a rapid rise of
tourists
to just over 16
million
people. The Australian government hosted around 2% of all the
Japanese
visitors that were travelling in 1985. Over the period from 1985 to 1988 the proportions rose from 2% to approximately 5%, but the next year it decreased by nearly 1%. Largely, from 1989 to 1995, the percentage of
Japanese
tourists
displayed a steady upward trend.
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