Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

In

this

day and age, there is a vast expanse of the consumption of sweetened goods, which is known as a prominent element resulting in a number of related issues. I do believe that raising

price

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of

this

kind of product is considered as a noticeable solution to have

this

tendancy

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tendency

restrained.

This

essay will analyze and discuss the divergent reasons

along with

my own perspective.

Firstly

,

according to

the economic principle, a large increase in price would accompany

with

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a reduction in demand, which

then

drives an adjustment in

customers’s

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behavior

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.

Therefore

, they become pickier and more reluctant

in consuming

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to consume

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sugary food and beverages and tend to take healthier nourishment as alternatives.

For instance

, if a healthy meal costs $5

while

a sugary junk food costs $10, people

then

prefer the first choice. Assuming that sugary food and drinks cost an arm and a leg, knowledgeable consumers would have no intention

for

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splashing out on it and students do not get that much

of

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money to pay for as well.

This

phenomenon will

then

of course lead to a decline in purchasing and promote a healthy lifestyle.

Secondly

, it is reasonable to implement

such

regulation as a way of suppressing the excessive intake of sweets

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people in general and children

in particular

. Despite being an indispensable ingredient in most cuisines, sugar still comes with

such

apparently substantial consequences: increasing the risk of obesity, diabetes and heart attack.

Hence

,

in addition

to

currently

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proposed solutions, the cost involved in consuming sugary

product

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products

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should be

deliberated

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to be extravagant.

However

, as mentioned above,

this

is not the optimal solution for the currently apprehensive problem. Apart from the given suggestion, there is more effort needed for the improvement. Not only does government play a vital role in managing the situation

as

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coming up with necessary regulations, but workshops and campaigns

also

need to be

orgainized

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organised

regularly in order to

progagate

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propagate

the negative effects of diseases caused by sugary products. In conclusion, surge pricing is an

approriate

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appropriate

proposal

in

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dealing with the

prevalently

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consumption of sweetened goods. It is believed to

brings

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a lot of benefits and reduce the

the

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health related

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issues.