Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear? -Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Amidst the growing popularity of
e-
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e-books'
e-book's
books
practical advantages, I believe that paper books
will remain to exist because some people
prefer to hold paper rather than an electronic device while
reading.
On the one hand, e-books
are easier to use as they only require a gadget to read plenty of books
. It is understandable that the number of people
who like to use this
method is increasing. This
is because they do not have to carry a lot of weight to bring many books
. For example
, many people
use Kindle, a device created only for reading, because of its practical function when travelling. People
can open as many books
as they want within one thing that is
far lighter.
However
, every individual has different preferences in reading. The reasons why this
happens vary, some like the texture of books
, others like to collect books
in their home, or they simply can not stare at a screen for a long time. Therefore
, there will always be a paper book demand on the market. For instance
, even with the rising usage of e-readers, bookstores that sell paper-based books
are still thriving. This
means that people
still like to read physical books
even though they can read them on their devices.
In conclusion, both ways of reading have their own benefits that may differ between people
. These differences happen because people
choose what they think is suitable for them. Because of this
, I believe that e-books
will not be the death of physical books
as people
's experiences of reading are different; hence
, there will always be a demand.Submitted by ieltswriting91 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that both the introduction and conclusion are clear and adequately present your viewpoint. The current introduction lacks a clear thesis statement and the conclusion is somewhat vague. A strong introduction should set the stage for the discussion and a strong conclusion should definitively state your position.
coherence cohesion
The essay needs better organization. Your ideas should flow logically from one paragraph to the next with effective use of transition words. Each paragraph should start with a clear topic sentence that indicates what that paragraph will discuss, followed by supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence that ties the paragraph's main idea to the overall argument.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a consistent and clear argument throughout the essay. Make sure that each paragraph is focused on a single idea that supports your overall argument and that the support for each idea is relevant and fully developed. This includes using examples effectively to illustrate your points.
task achievement
Ensure you address all parts of the prompt thoroughly. You gave reasons for the persistence of paper books but could expand on the argument why some believe e-books will lead to their disappearance. Provide more balanced coverage of both sides of the argument to fully satisfy the task requirements.
task achievement
Clarify and expand on your ideas to ensure they are fully expressed. Some statements could benefit from additional explanation or specific details to enhance understanding of your position.
task achievement
Include more relevant, specific examples to support your arguments. Your examples should clearly demonstrate the point you're trying to make and be directly related to the prompt.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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