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The graph shows below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph shows below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line graph illustrates the data about how many commodities were hauled by four types of transportation in the UK during a 28-year span from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
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, all the transport modes experience considerable growth until 2002.
Firstly
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, goods transported by road started at 70
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974.
Then
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, it fluctuated over 12 years later from 1982 to 1994 before it surged continuously to 99
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
On the other hand
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, pipelines have a trend which was increasing over time but became the least used mode of transport. It
initiated
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peaked
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 at 7
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974 and finished at 22
million
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tonnes
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 in the
last
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 year.
In addition
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, water transportation began at 39
million
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tonnes
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 in the first year and reached its peak in 1982 at the level of 56
million
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tonnes
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. In the period between 1982 and 1990, it tended to grow in a small amount not exceeding 60
million
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tonnes
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 until it dropped to the level of 54
million
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tonnes
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 in 1998. Four years later, it continued to jump. The rail mode started out at approximately the same level as the water in the beginning year. Afterwards, it fluctuated before finalizing the trend at 41
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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