The maps below show the village Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
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there were many farmyards in Stokeford village which were placed in the Northeast and Southwest areas. The central part was occupied by mixed households, shops and the Post office. Opposite Add a comma
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local school and Gardens with a Large house were located.
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, the number of houses increased almost four times, because new buildings were added in the central area and the southwest between the river and road. Houses appeared in the Northwest as well. In both mentioned places farmyards totally disappeared. Shops were removed, however
, the Post office stayed in the same position and the school was even enlarged. The Large house in the Garden sector was converted to the
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