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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.
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Southland's main exports in 2000, 20..., and the future projections for 2025 are demonstrated by the bar chart below. Meat products have taken the least number of 2000, 20... with below 6
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 been predicted that in the future projections for 2025, it will keep decreasing. On top of the chart is the International tourism figure. In 2000, it was at more than 8
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 and the number of international
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 in *20... were reach 9
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 said that it will continue to climb up in the future. Dairy products
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 number was at 7
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 in 2000 and it
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 significantly increased to about 9.5 and 10
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 in the next several years.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends
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