The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

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been predicted that in the future projections for 2025, it will keep decreasing. On top of the chart is the International tourism figure. In 2000, it was at more than 8

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in *20... were reach 9

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said that it will continue to climb up in the future. Dairy products

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number was at 7

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significantly increased to about 9.5 and 10

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in the next several years.

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Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends

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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can do with it?

Most of the people in the society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact to the society due to this?

Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries, and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?

Some believe that it is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.) and, therefore, there is no reason to try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?