The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

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Southland's main exports in 2000, 20..., and the future projections for 2025 are demonstrated by the bar chart below. Meat products have taken the least number of 2000, 20... with below 6

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been predicted that in the future projections for 2025, it will keep decreasing. On top of the chart is the International tourism figure. In 2000, it was at more than 8

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in *20... were reach 9

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said that it will continue to climb up in the future. Dairy products

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number was at 7

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in 2000 and it

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significantly increased to about 9.5 and 10

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in the next several years.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Exports, main exports, projections, trends, significant changes, increased, decreased, speculate, external factors, global demand, technological advancements, trade policies, agriculture, technology, manufacturing, economic implications, employment, GDP, economic growth, global economic trends

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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

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