The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps provide the differences in

layout

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Westley

town between the year 1815 and its current development. Generally, plenty of new

buildings

and a transport facility have been built in the city compared to its condition in 1815.

Firstly

the

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Westley

town has been through a rapid development

progress

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process

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. The new public facilities

such

intercity

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the intercity

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train, sports

center

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centre

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, shopping

center

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, and cinema have been added in order to replace the old

one

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, like the

coach

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inn.

In addition

, there are two new

buildings

which are the

red lion

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Red Lion

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and a hotel that replaced lord

westley

's house.

However

, there are two

buildings

that have been preserved since 1815 and

still

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located in the same location, those are the market square and town hall.

Currently

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the

westley

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Westley

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city

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has a modern transportation system which is the intercity train to

london

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London

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This

train's railway has been built in the empty fields close to the market square.

While other

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spaces

such

lenton

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Lenton

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woods and housing

area

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areas

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has been changed by the development of housing

estate

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and business

area

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Overall

, the addition of new

buildings

and facilities now has replaced the

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existence

existance

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existence

of the green area,

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Vocabulary: Replace the words westley, buildings with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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21Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

195 words

6.50

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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