The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps provide the differences in

layout

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the layout

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Westley

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town between the year 1815 and its current development. Generally, plenty of new

buildings

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and a transport facility have been built in the city compared to its condition in 1815.

Firstly

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the

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apply

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Westley

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town has been through a rapid development

progress

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process

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. The new public facilities

such

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intercity

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the intercity

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train, sports

center

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centre

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, shopping

center

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centre

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, and cinema have been added in order to replace the old

one

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ones

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, like the

coach

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coaching

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inn.

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, there are two new

buildings

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which are the

red lion

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Red Lion

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and a hotel that replaced lord

westley

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's house.

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, there are two

buildings

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that have been preserved since 1815 and

still

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located in the same location, those are the market square and town hall.

Currently

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the

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westley

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Westley

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city

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has a modern transportation system which is the intercity train to

london

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London

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This

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train's railway has been built in the empty fields close to the market square.

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While other

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spaces

such

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lenton

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Lenton

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woods and housing

area

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areas

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has been changed by the development of housing

estate

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estates

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and business

area

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Overall

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, the addition of new

buildings

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and facilities now has replaced the

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existence

existance

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existence

of the green area,

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words westley, buildings with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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