In recent years, there have been numerous
people
getting married and having
children
in their thirties rather than
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age. As
such
, there are merits and demerits in
this
alteration,
although
I opine
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merits outweigh the demerits. In my view, getting
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and building
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are serious matters that need
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and individual growth. Late marriages and parenthood offer more time to build
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foundation before starting a family. In
this
essay, I will examine all the relevant opinions based on factual premises.
There are several arguments, the most prominent one is that getting married and becoming
parents
must provide better
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stability for
children
. To pursue all of
this
,
people
must establish their
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and have stable
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.
For example
, if
people
want to have
children
, they must prepare everything that their
children
need in the future.
In addition
,
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marriage and childbirth can give more
to pursue personal goals and education,
thus
after marrying they can be more
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on their
children
and family's goals.
On the other hand
, delaying marriage and childbirth can
be reducingWrong verb form
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the
to haveChange preposition
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a Correct the article-noun agreement
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children
in the future because of decreasing fertility.
Moreover
, other health problems and risks to mother and child.
In addition
, having
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childFix the agreement mistake
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in
thirtiesCorrect pronoun usage
their thirties
his thirties
her thirties
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might be difficult to match the energy with
children
and potentially lack of bonding between
parents
and
children
.
Hence
,
children
might
be feelingWrong verb form
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ignored and less loved
fromChange preposition
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their
parents
.
In conclusion, tying
aCorrect article usage
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knot and having
children
inChange preposition
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such
youngCorrect article usage
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age is incredible,
however
, being ready and steady
as Change preposition
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physically, mentally, and financially are important to have
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excellent family. In my opinion, getting married late
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numerous
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to
people
as an individual or as
parents
in the future.