The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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Four of
pie
diagrams above give Correct article usage
the pie
infromation
about one African Correct your spelling
information
Country
Change noun form
Country's
teenagers
main reasons for using their phones Change noun form
teenager's
teenagers'
since
2016 Change preposition
from
till
2019. There are Change preposition
to
few
main reasons Correct article usage
a few
such
as social network
, email, digital Fix the agreement mistake
networks
camera
, and phone calls.
Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
According to
the data, social networks were always the highest
main reason Correct word choice
apply
since
2016 till 2019. Change preposition
from
It is clear that
email was that
always Wrong verb form
has
had
decreased from 25% to 19% between 2016 and 2019. Unnecessary verb
apply
Then
, digital camera
had 15% twice in 2016 and 2017, but Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
then
, the apply number slightly increased to 18% and 20% in 2018 and 2019. On the other hand
, phone calls had the most fluctuated
data on Wrong verb form
fluctuating
this
pie diagram because from 2016 to 2017 the number were
rise from 10% to 13%. Change the verb form
was
While
,
in 2018 and 2019 the data Remove the comma
apply
were drop
to 11% in 2018 and 5% in the year 2019.
Wrong verb form
dropped
To sum up
, the biggest main reason was for social network
; Fix the agreement mistake
networks
then
, the second place was for email; and also
, the third position was for digital camera
; Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
lastly
, the last
place was for phone calls.Submitted by talithanakhwah19 on
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