A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/she has written to ask for your advice.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •describe why you think he/she will enjoy it •explain why you recommend studying at your university •give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear
Dear John,
I hope
this
letter finds you well, as you advised the last
we talked that
you have a desire to spend a semester studying here in Egypt, I'm writing Correct word choice
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this
letter to you to know that I'm quite happy to hear that from you.
Although
there are no more students like to spend their semester studying in Egypt, I'm sure that you will find this
interesting. Firstly
, the
life here is cheap so most Correct article usage
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of
accommodation places are affordable and Change preposition
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secondly
, there are many tourism
locations you can visit Replace the word
tourist
while
you study in Egypt.
I strongly recommend to study
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in
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at
this
university due to
several reasons, the doctors and teachers are understanding, moreover
, they are supportive and always try to help new students, if I were you, I would choose this
place to complete my studies.
The way to apply for this
university is easy you can do it online without need
to go there, I could help you with that bro if you Add an article
the need
couldn't
do it alone.
I hope to hear from you soon.
with love,
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Coherence
The logical structure of the paragraphs are adequately organized, but transitions between ideas could be smoother.
Cohesion
The greeting could be made more personalized and warm, while the closing could be made more formal and professional to suit the nature of the letter.
Paragraph Structure
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clarity and impact.
Task Response
The response to the task is generally complete, providing answers to all questions asked, but could be more thorough and detailed.
Tone
Aim for a more consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter; it should be friendly but also convey the seriousness of giving advice on studying abroad.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,