3. The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph provides the details of the three major issues that residents reported in seven
cities
of the UK in 2008.
It is shown that health servicesUse synonyms
,
and education and training are clearly the biggest issues in all Remove the comma
apply
cities
. Use synonyms
However
, air pollution was not really a concern for the majority of residents, with Manchester having the highest ratio at around 15 %.
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According to
the figures, health services were the dominant problem, with it being the major issue in five out of seven, Linking Words
although
, Belfast and Cardiff had the highest percentages at almost 60%. Linking Words
In addition
, there is no significant difference in the graphs for education and training, all exceeding 50 %, except for Manchester and Newcastle with both approximately 45%.
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To sum up
, people in urban areas are concerned most about health services and education training, Linking Words
although
the former was more serious in some Linking Words
cities
Use synonyms
while
the residents were troubled by the latter in other Linking Words
cities
. Interestingly, air pollution remained the least significant problem in every city.Use synonyms
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