The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
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The line graph demonstrates the
amount
of
money
in US
dollars
(millions) spent on
books
in
Germany
, France, Italy and
Austria
from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, over the 10-year period,
Germany
spent the most
money
on
books
while
Austria
initially
started with the least
money
spent on
books
, it had a consistent increase from 2001, spending more
money
by 2005 than Italy. As seen from the line graph, the two countries with the highest
amount
of
money
spent on
books
from 1995 to 2005 are
Germany
and France.
Germany
remains at the highest place, with its peak in 2005 with the total
amount
of approximately 95 million
dollars
spent on
books
.
On the other hand
, France
also
peaked in 2005 with nearly 70 million
dollars
spent on
books
.
On the contrary
, the two nations with the least
amount
of
money
spent on
books
are Italy and
Austria
.
Although
Austria
started as the nation with the least
money
spent, it has a gradual increase from 2001, taking over Italy in around 2002. It can be seen from the line graph that Italy remain consistent with its spending on
books
with the highest peak in 2005 at around 60 million
dollars
spent.
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