The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
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The line graph illustrates the average daily temperatures in two Australian cities,
while
the bar' displays the average count of rainy days in both places by month. From an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
Canberra has a lower temperature than Brisbane throughout the year.
However
, rainfall was more frequent in the latter during
this
period, except in June through October.
To begin
with the first diagram, the average minimum temperature in January was over 20 in Brisbane, which fell in midyear before increasing to return to its original level. The number in Canberra followed a similar, though slightly lower, trajectory, with around 13% at the beginning and finish.
Furthermore
, the maximums' in both towns
also
experienced the same pattern, despite starting and ending at less than 30. Moving to the second graphic, nearly one-third of the total days in the first trimester experienced wet weather in Brisbane, decreasing to the lowest point (7) in June.
Subsequently
,
this
data maintained the same point in the following quarter prior to rising and reaching 12
at the end
of the period.
In contrast
, those in Canberra started with a smaller proportion (7).
Although
this
figure grew and outnumbered the counterpart from June until October with 10, it remained relatively stable in the
last
two months.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average daily maximum
  • average daily minimum
  • rainfall
  • degrees Celsius (°C)
  • anomalies
  • trends
  • geographic location
  • climate zones
  • seasonal changes
  • data representation
  • comparison
  • temperature range
  • weather patterns
  • statistical analysis
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